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i.
your love is like a visit to the dentist, with
aching hearts and aching teeth.
your words start off as syrupy sweet
and i swish them around in my
mouth, until i can barely speak.
slowly but surely, you
embed yourself into my teeth.
you rot my insides and
pulled 'till i bleed.
it hurts so bad, but i
can't stop listening. and
the painkillers i take
don't last for eternity.
ii.
your love is a visit to the dentist.
you're bad for me;
bad to the core, yet
i hesitate to have you gone
(i did not hesitate for too long)
there was a time when
everything became numb
and i wasn't ready, but
then it was done.
iii.
life goes on after your love.
the first day after, i was
raw and red. and
the medicine wasn't working
as fast as they said.
there's an impression of you
in my mouth. a
lingering taste of blood
that i long to wash out.
i notice your presence (or
rather the lack of it)
whenever i eat. the words
don't sound as good as they did.
it seems i have lost my sweet tooth.
your love is like a visit to the dentist, with
aching hearts and aching teeth.
your words start off as syrupy sweet
and i swish them around in my
mouth, until i can barely speak.
slowly but surely, you
embed yourself into my teeth.
you rot my insides and
pulled 'till i bleed.
it hurts so bad, but i
can't stop listening. and
the painkillers i take
don't last for eternity.
ii.
your love is a visit to the dentist.
you're bad for me;
bad to the core, yet
i hesitate to have you gone
(i did not hesitate for too long)
there was a time when
everything became numb
and i wasn't ready, but
then it was done.
iii.
life goes on after your love.
the first day after, i was
raw and red. and
the medicine wasn't working
as fast as they said.
there's an impression of you
in my mouth. a
lingering taste of blood
that i long to wash out.
i notice your presence (or
rather the lack of it)
whenever i eat. the words
don't sound as good as they did.
it seems i have lost my sweet tooth.
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inspired by a visit to the dentist. not very pretty.
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Who hurt you and made you so sad? I will find them! Lol but seriously this is so good but so sad! The metaphor is amazing :3